My comment and why it is a good quality comment

 

I think my comment is a good quality because it is friendly and i have put capital letters and full stops. 

Painted version and original

 

                                                                     painted version

I put some colour in it because it was just white and I thought that the clothing on it could have some colour on it. 

original

The house

This is my video that I made with Jordan And we used stop motion to do it. 

The plot

 They were planning a plot to steal the very expensive diamond staff from the great scroll museum for their master, the hairy mole rat. They live in the  dark oak woods in an underground bunker. When they were plotting their plan they needed to be very smart. The great scroll museum has the world's best security, The heat sensing lasers that will melt your skin, steel gates harder than anything in the world, with guards with tigers to eat off the brains of anyone that comes after hours and way more. They need to know what time the guard’s shifts end and when and where they are going to get in? They were going to get  through the roof. The only security on the roof is the lights and the  invisible lasers. 

That night  they were leaving from their top secret base in their helicopter. They flew straight over the museum  like nothing happened but one of them stayed in the helicopter and the others jumped out with their jet packs, so they didn't set off the alarm. There was one spot where there were no lasers where the  window was, they carefully opened the window with their suction pads so they didn't break the window. 

When they got in there, there were guards everywhere but no tigers so they just knocked the guards out with a baseball bat. Carefully with their lazer beam stick they cut the glass case that was holding the diamond staff They attentively took it. Devastating mistake, one dumb team mate takes a wrong step and sets the alarm of they are souranded with gurds all the way around they were focused on the gurds, but the hariy mole rat comes out of no where and knocks the guards out. They use the grapple hook to get out of the museum without a scratch. The helicopter picked them up and they flew off without a trace.

MY VIDEO (The Flipper Card)

This is my video and I made it with Jordan with stop motion. 

The 3 little pigs with a twist .

My journey to Argentina

 This is about how Me and my Family got to Argentina and what I did on the way there.

my journey to Argentina when I was 7 years old I drove up to Wellington with my dad and mum and my sister. Then me and my mum and sister took a plane to Auckland. My dad wasn’t coming.

The flight to Auckland on Air New Zealand didn't feel long. It was boring on the plane because there was nothing to do. On the plane when we got to Auckland we had to wait for like 3 hours before the plane was going to take off. When we were starting to go on the plane we had to go through security and that took forever. So after that we got on the plane we found our seat which I think was number 32. 

It was a 12 hour flight to Chile because there are no flights from Auckland to Argentina. So we had to stop in Chile. On the plane I went straight to my seat and turned on the small t.v in front of us. I remembered that I was watching Frozen and then I watched Zootopia. I remember that the company on the flight was Latam.

 When we got to Chile we got off the plane and we didn’t even have to wait that long. When we were crossing the mountains we took the same company plane,it was a smaller plane. We still had t.vs on the plane because we needed a big plane to cross the Andes mountains. We arrived in Buenos Aires and we took a taxi to a very extremely Fancy Hotel. 

The next morning my mum’s sister came and picked us up. Then we went to our Grandma's house. It was a long drive there because they lived in Rosario and we stayed there for a month then we went home.